by EssenceOfLace Mar 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Wrapped in your never ending circle of imaginary love. |
by Sora
Wow this poem was brillant to me. i can totally relate to every line. a great flow and i love how you can make your wok sad, yet beautiful. you can really make a reader think. and i love that. job well done. 5/5. |
by fearose
I love how you relate love to a game. So true. Then you bring it all together about mid-poem when you relate the world to a game. Beautifully penned. I really like your work thus far and you deserve a great deal of amazing ratings because this is amazing work. 5/5 |
by Brennan P
I greatly enjoyed this poem it truely tells it how it is 5/5 |
by Amaranthine
Wow. the flow of this poem was amazing.It has such a deep meaning with great emotion. |
F-cking incredible, down to every word this is great and very accurate. |