F-cking incredible, down to every word this is great and very accurate.

Set my heart free,
to find the one I've longed for,
your love is fake,
just a game of torture.

my favorite stanza^

hey tell me what you think of some of mine..

Wow. the flow of this poem was amazing.It has such a deep meaning with great emotion.
the ending was my favorite. I can really relate.
5/5

I greatly enjoyed this poem it truely tells it how it is 5/5

I love how you relate love to a game. So true. Then you bring it all together about mid-poem when you relate the world to a game. Beautifully penned. I really like your work thus far and you deserve a great deal of amazing ratings because this is amazing work. 5/5

Wow this poem was brillant to me. i can totally relate to every line. a great flow and i love how you can make your wok sad, yet beautiful. you can really make a reader think. and i love that. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.