Comments : All at once

  • 18 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

    Great Poem :) It's sad though... Like me...
    5/5 Keep it up, take Care

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "All at once my world seemed so perfect, with you by my side hand in hand heart in heart. I thought we had something special I thought you cared."

    Just when we think things are perfect, our worlds come tumbling down and perfection is lost. Words cut deeper than what most people would think. An emotive write.

    All the best.