Steven, This is beautiful....very heartfelt....made me pick up the phone and call my dad...a wonderful, moving poem...

Woah!

It's Soo emotional And Sad, With a really good flow.. well done keep it up.

Heart felt write my friend... This one hit home for me, gave me a small lump in my throat. You've written some exceptionally beautiful pieces the last few days, this one is at the top of those for me :) Great writing... Let the spirit of your father live on, do what he would have told you to!!

This poem touched me.It makes me think of my piece, Understanding at a graveside I wrote for my father, however it is the exact opposite in subject, my father and I were not close and I envy you the relationship you had with yours.Family, parents are so important in our lives.This is a touching write, the loss of a wise and caring man.Though sad and obviously missing your father, be happy for the time and memories you do have.You were lucky.

Beautiful and heartbreaking.. I can relate to every word and felt the pain in your words. Amazing and heartfelt, I love it!

Sososo amazing, the emotion... you made me feel what you felt! plus i can relate! keep it UP

Oh dear that was great....lovely and so heartfelt......

Bharti

A very heartfelt poem my friend and you did an excellent job capturing the feelings. Keep writing my friend. Very beautiful poem