This is good, but i think that the flow could have been a bit better than this...just my feelings, dont mind.

still i must say that this was good enough to make me comments and vote.. :o)

all the best and take care
5/5

Wow do I know this feeling I am going through it also I am married happy may I add but I fall in love with a great girl who I cant have and I will always love and dream off well stay strong and keep ur head up great poem and keep writing 5/5