by Ariana Mar 18, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Cliche |
Simply wonderful, superlative write Ariana!!! |
Love is simply that.... living the cliche.... great job |
This is great.I love how you used the cliche subject to convey something we have all felt, yet it's done in a such a fresh(non-cliched-lol) way.A very heartfelt and touching piece.The use of the last line in the first stanza as the last line in the final stanze is superb, really gives it impact. |