Very sad poem.. but I loved it anyway. it is true that the people you trust the most have the power to cause the worse scars but in loving people we have to take the chance that they wont hurt us.. Nice work thanx for your comment on my poem

Good poem, I enjoyed reading. Trust is a hard thing to gain and even harder to gain abck once you lost it. Good work again, keep writing

Beautiful emotion penned, simply but well done...

One of the best...mademy night. I liked the rhyme this oozed emotion.
One word: fantabulous!!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Hey um ... was this about that one time on the bus ... You know I kinda stopped reading your poems after that for a long time, and you have to know that I was sorry for that. I don't think we'll ever go back to being as close as we were, but I wanted to thank you because after being friends with you, I can cry freely, I can feel, I can hope and dream. but i can also feel bad now ... and still in my heart is this little spot from that day, so I just stopped by with this comment to say that I'm sorry. I never ment to hurt you that bad and I'm asking forgivness. I understand if you decide that it's too much to forgive that incident but I'm asking for it cuz that's all I can do

Love ya 4 eva n eva
Mia