A very flawless flowing poem that most of us can relate to.

Trouble in the water trouble in the air
go to the other sde of the world you'll find trouble there

great poem

Nice words :) The poem flowed really well too - I especially like the last line of the last stanza, and the stanza:

Wish someone would take me,
away from this place,
Wish someone would try,
to put a smile on this face,

Brilliant!

Peace. [Sole]

This was very good a good topic most can relate to and it was expressed beautifully, the flow was good except for these two lines which kinda were off a bit

My problems better off,
left alone on a shelf,

but otherwise i think it was a brilliant poem well done :D ally

Hey darlin i can feel the em0ti0n in this. very t0uchng

God what a brillinat poem, so sad and this touched my heart, made me sad to think about you feels so sad and alone in this world, when you have so many poeple in your life who loves you, including me =0) You know my shoulders are here for you to cry on...Be strong hunni and don't forget that you are not alone, I am here for you!!!

Much Love from me to you =0) - Sabrina

So sad, touches my heart but do as this stanza says:

I'll keep holding on strong,
until that day I will pray,
That maybe sometime soon,
I will see a better day,

And it will get better....always keep faith and hope, never give up....

love ya, Ann

Hey, this is really sad and u hv xpressed the feelings very nicely

all the best and stay strong
take care
5/5

Aww honey ill give u hug!
its a reli gd poem i wish i could write like that !

lots of love, Nelly xxx

Its beautiful

Interesting, nice stuff...
Advice: keep writing...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Don't know if you remember me but i still read your poems when i can... it makes me smile to see how you've developed as a writer. You're really great! Haven't posted anything new though... kidn've too personal... keep up the good work:)

Hey that was REALLY good!!! I liked it and I liked your b-day one too!!! ill talk to ya l8ter