I dont have the words to describe this one. It was out of the world. I love the vision that you have towards everything, which makes your poems so unique. It's a unique piece indeed.

I have never read bible. but i was always excited to know about it. i guess you to fulfilled my wish about learning something from it. u truly rock sir.... i wont vote u for what u wrote bcoz i aint sure whether its true or false. but i ll vote u for one thg... your gr8 poem.... it rocks...

I find this prophetic too, lovely, and down to earth. The artistic view point of ancient history paints a very impresive picture of the whole.

This makes me want to go take time to read my Bible... This is awesome...keep it up...

Very interesting, it makes one think.
I like it.

Wow. i really loved this...there were a lot of questions asked but in a very simple way. almost like a domino effect...how we can never be happy with what God gives us because of the Void in our lives...

Does reality really exist or did we make it up?

^ i really loved this as a last line...very very strong statement, question, haha. it's midnight, i dunno what i'm talking about, sorry.

but over all, great job.

OMG I loved it <3
There are simply no words to describe how much I loved it <3
You really know your bible ;]
Which is great <3 Keep up the UNIQUENESSS!!

A Definate 5 out of 5
- Nic x

This kept me reading and I liked it very much, very thought provoking and philosophical. Almost had me feeling sorry for the poor void!

This was very interesting and very well put,,,great title though this poem seems to be like a story in a way but non the less I loved it,,,very greatly done :) :) 5/5