I'm sick of people always looking down upon others, and saying that they will never amount to anything and can't reach their dreams. This poem tries to send the message that no matter what everybody says you have to try, or else you will be regretting it.

Yeah thats a great message
well done

xx ALLY xx

That dosent make sense now i re read it, sorry, what i meant was it was a really good expression of your feelings on the topic, youve said it well and i know what you mean Love, Ally

You seem very fluent in expressing your thoughts on paper.
I liked the rhythm of this poem. The combination of its
Simplicity, your honesty, the good choice of words and
The meaning within it( that we shouldn’t give up and we
Should have confidence in ourselves) add to the beauty
of this poem. I enjoyed reading this Larry especially the
beginning and there when you say “ success was not
plausible. Cuz I was uncontrollable but now I’m
unstoppable Cuz I believed in me.” Yup, I loved
that^^^ part.
May you be as happy as I am today ; )
Marjan

Oh I love this poem soo much...great job..wow im practicly speechless...It was so good and i love the flow...I can relate to it so well....Awesome...Joc

Great ending. so sad wen everyone gives up on u i knwo that feeling well, having to fend 4 urself in a way.

I like ur poems, this one could be a song