I'm missing you

by ♥gloriaËšs~glen♥   Mar 18, 2006


If the tears could scream
whole world would be deaf
by the intensity of screams
deafening making all deaf

if the tears could turn loose
the whole world would drown
in the ocean overflowing
from my eyes in missing you

I hide my tears and smile
with overflowing ocean
kept locked behind my
tightly closed crying eyes

J...My heart is longing, My heart is blue.
My heart is pining, I am missing you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aww, This is really good. Fav lines:
    "J...My heart is longing, My heart is blue.
    My heart is pining, I am missing you"
    Very good poem, I loved it. And thanx heaps for the comment =]

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    You can feel the pain and the longing for that one you so miss.....truly heartfelt, so sad, but beautifully written.

    love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I think I know just how you feel . . .Nice poetry :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    The best and most poetic and my favorite part is the start.
    You seem like a really great poet.& that part was beautifully
    Written too:
    “kept locked behind my
    tightly closed crying eyes”
    with those things you said, one can understand your
    feelings better when at the end you wrote “I miss you”.
    So, I really liked the way you wrote this one. Keep it up.
    Much love,
    Marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I thought the metaphors and words were a good choice but the first paragraph didn't seem to flow with the rest of them to me.

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