Eternal (Tetractys)

by Timothy r   Mar 18, 2006


Breath
exhaled
simply pure
captured inside
a blue balloon the day you passed away

*Tetractys consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables

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  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Great work, Tim! I'm so proud of you for doing a form poem! And this was excellent! It said so much in just those few words!

    Yay You!!
    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow! I'm impressed. The last line absolutely amazing. Completely blew me away...
    Glad to see your trying new styles.
    Love ya~Holly

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