This is simply amazing - very rarely do powerful emotions come together with such beautiful verse! what u have here is a true masterpiece. excellent.

thank you very much for taking the time to read my work and your valuable comments.

good luck and peace
shobhana

I know how much this poem means to you.You have expressed it so well.The uniquie imagery and language is a teatament to your poetic abilty.But it is the emotion that truly shines through.We do owe the dead the living memory of all they were and all they meant to us.Never forget that.
Gary J

Very well written i thought...