Comments : My Dreams

  • 18 years ago

    by May Lee

    Hi Christina, wow your poem really spoke to me, and i like your choice of words. But its so sad, and I hope thats not how you are feeling :-(. I can tell you've got talent.. So glad I'm the first to comment :-D!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristie

    Damn ur going on my favorites! just like all ur other works...WOW! awesome! never stop writing poetry babe!

    -Kristie

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    In Reality,
    I Trip And Fall Over Regret,

    and-

    Silent Slumber Into Screams''

    Some immense lines, as i was reading i was slightely jealous. I have nightmares and had forgotten just what deep sleep was like. But like you said, everything succumbs to reality. Even Dreams.

    Anyways, enough of the gloom! I've read some of your poems, and what I love is your language and the effects they provoke.

    Lv A, x