Unfortunate

I empathise with this fully. thank you

much love and many kisses,
bex

So true!! great work here!

Absolutely, short but speaks volumes, it flows well and the message is crystal clear. Well done x

How you cram so much goodness into such a short space?

Phenomenal this was no less effective than poems three times the length.

Strong message, very direct. Nice stuff..

[lostlaureate - come find me]

It was short but that gave it more impact. I think the final line held the most. Normally, I'd say go into more detail, but I think this one didn't need any more than what it had.