Sorry it took so long for me to get to commenting, my internet was down and my stupid school comps won't let you comment so my bad. n e wayz i really liked the poem it was good, descriptive and short good job, not many people can do that

lataz,
°•Thorn•°

Short n gets right to the point I LIKE IT!!

Loved it

Very nice poem!...i loved it..very short...but means alot....it makes me think about alot of people at my school.....very nice 5/5!
~*Linz*~

I liked it alot. twas a nice poem. . . yay!

Beautiful poem short but very effective! great message the last line finishes it well ALLy

Another great job well done! This poem is so true too. I kinda used to be like that, I was a real b***h, And i never thought it would come back to me, And it did. And yeah lol ive learnt my lesson! But keep up the great work, Im lovin your poetry!

luv natalie x-x

Exellent. sorry i took so long getting to your comments. this poem was exellnt. it was sad, but it had such an impotent message. well done

Ruby

Again, short and to the point. It could be added too, but that might take away the snappy power that gives it that little bit of life.

Peace. [Sole]

So short yet completely covers what needs to be said.truly touched me. the ending was great

It was short but that gave it more impact. I think the final line held the most. Normally, I'd say go into more detail, but I think this one didn't need any more than what it had.

How you cram so much goodness into such a short space?

Phenomenal this was no less effective than poems three times the length.

Strong message, very direct. Nice stuff..

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Absolutely, short but speaks volumes, it flows well and the message is crystal clear. Well done x

So true!! great work here!

I empathise with this fully. thank you

much love and many kisses,
bex