Questioning You

by Christina Yap   Mar 18, 2006


I fear I may fall,
I fear I may care,
Just a little bit more than I would dare

Feelings developed,
Buried inside
In which each n everyday I continue 2 hide

But you,
I wonder,
Who you really are
But you keep your emotions distant,
From me, very far

Honestly I like you,
But I don’t no whether
You’re a heart breaker,
Or a heart mender
I wonder if you care for the meaning of love
If you fear love or just don’t care about love
I wonder why I worry
Or why I would even dare
To go beyond my limits and take myself there
When I know I might dread,
What I find
But the truth is buried
Inside of your mind

Yes, I trust you,
Even more than you know
But I feel that there’s more acts
To this show

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    This one is nicely written and flowing well. I like the way words strung each other. You kept it going well :)

    Yes, I trust you,
    Even more than you know
    But I feel that there’s more acts
    To this show

    Nice lines

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    This is a very good poem! I can definatly tell that you put alot of your heart into it. Altho I could tell that you used alot of forced rhyming, which is okay because it takes FOREVER to finally be able to flow with ease in poems! I've read a few other poems you've written and you've come a long way! You might want to break this poem down into smaller paragraphs so that it'll be easier for the reader to grasp. Also it's always nice to use correct wording (such as saying know and not no) But other than that it was a awesome read! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    OMG awesome - this spoke to my heart I properly love this poem - reflects all my feelings =]=]=]

  • 18 years ago

    by †Undone♥

    I loved it. I didn't expect the ending, but i still loved it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LettersFromEnnis

    This poem's very well written and I just loved the last line. Awesome work!

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