Awsome! I loved it!

This was a beautiful poem with a good message people can relate too. i espically liked the first two and last two lines. one suggestion, typ put words properly, ie dont write u or 2 beause it makes it eaiser to rad and adds to the overall presentation of the poem but yeah well done
Love,
Ally

It was a beautiful poem and a nice use of words but I couldn't get over the fact that you used u and lowercase i. Sorry it's a pet peeve of mine I guess :)

Very nice poem! i liked the chioce of words! this is a poem that alot of people can realate to..and that is what catches the readers attention!...i loved it 5/5!
~*Linz*~

This poem's very well written and I just loved the last line. Awesome work!

I loved it. I didn't expect the ending, but i still loved it. 5/5

OMG awesome - this spoke to my heart I properly love this poem - reflects all my feelings =]=]=]

This is a very good poem! I can definatly tell that you put alot of your heart into it. Altho I could tell that you used alot of forced rhyming, which is okay because it takes FOREVER to finally be able to flow with ease in poems! I've read a few other poems you've written and you've come a long way! You might want to break this poem down into smaller paragraphs so that it'll be easier for the reader to grasp. Also it's always nice to use correct wording (such as saying know and not no) But other than that it was a awesome read! 5/5!

This one is nicely written and flowing well. I like the way words strung each other. You kept it going well :)

Yes, I trust you,
Even more than you know
But I feel that there’s more acts
To this show

Nice lines