Wow i love this so sad but so sweet it flows beautifully and i espically like this bit

Unconsciously I shed a tear
As it silently rolls of my face I wish you ware here
To wipe my tear and tell me to be strong,
Give me an embrace and tell me it won't take long

once again well done 5/5 xxALLYxx

Hey! great job! lol I was just about to paste that bit up there when I saw it there. def the highlight of the poem! *hugs* keep it up!

Besides the few spelling mistakes, I think this was a beautiful poem/song. Keep writing!

If that was released I'd HAVE to buy it -I'm impressed

Wow that was a awesome poem!!!!! keep up the good work!!!!

Wow thats hella good

Wow, stef, you should be really strong if you can bear all
This. But then again, we all have our own pains and we
Should all stay strong. That’s part of life. Yeah, as you
Said, you should endure the pain and the happy times
Will be on their way soon.
I liked the way you’re still loyal to your friend.
A wonderfully written poem especially that part that you
Repeated for 4 times. You seem talented.
Much love,
marjan

Wow! This alomst makes me feel what you were feeling when you wrote it! Keep it up!

Beautiful. i love the repeating stanza. i love it.

Wow This was really good! Way better then mine lol I loved it! I really liked the chorus too. It seemed catchy. lol i hope this song sells one day! 5/5

luv natalie x-x