That poem was Very very Good..and great message and metaphoric uses in there..i Loved it
and it flowed pretty good
and your words were amazing
and great rhyme
Great job throughout
5/5
~TPOMH~

That was awesome! I really cant say anything else...Dont you hate it how people look at your poem but never take time to comment..You have gotten so many visits..but only a few comments...Well Keep it up..Its great!!

~Always4You~

I hate "noncommentors"! It's different when a poem makes no impression on you, but this will stay with me! I love you, Ruthie!
Kris

GASP! I loved it loved it to the extremeeeeeeee! Grawr. I love you too! Grrness. Man this poem is great! 5/5 wonderful structure and flow! Good job! Keep it up!

(Psst. THankies for the comment)
Lolli.xx