Oh

by firexflys   Mar 19, 2006


I don't know where you are
now I wonder if your feeling down,
we been apart so long,
I feel my tears could drown

I don't know if you hear
Me when I call,
Because you're the only one
I trust to catch me when I fall,

I know you know I cry I can't
Seem to dry my eyes, But every
one else is fooled by my disguise

Your living you life without
Me by your side And I just
keep telling my self all I can do is try

I still love you and I want to always
Be there, I know the love that we
Found is very rare, I think about the
Times we shared and I cant help but stare
I keep think how much we were a great pair

I still can't believe it turned out
Like this, We were so happy always
In a sweet bliss I remember the last
Time we hugged the last time we kissed
And oh baby that's what I miss

I cry my self to sleep, and try
to talk to friends, But this pain
just doesn't want to mend it wont even
bend, Your always in my heart,
the memories of us wont part
And Falling in love with you was smart

and when I am sleeping peacefully i feel
you close and I feel my smile it glows
I feel you next to me, like the air I breathe
With your love I'm no longer in need

I won't forget you kiss I wont forget your hug
And my heart will never go on with out your love
You're my smile you're my heart you're my angel
And I hope and pray to God we don't ever Part

Written by FireXfly ©

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  • 18 years ago

    by jamie ellen

    Very touching well done there are some very sweet ideas in their

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Hmm, this is an ok love poem, it had quite a few problems in it...but it was lovely to read.
    First stanza on the second line it should be "you're" and then on the third line, "we've."
    Fourth stanza first line it should be "you're" and the same for the fourth line of the seventh stanza.
    Final stanza, first line it should be "your."
    You had some really romantic and sweet ideas, but to me the rhymes seemed a bit cheesy and overused.
    A loving poem, but it could do with some touching up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Beautiful poetry - though there are a few small mistakes.

    Seem to dry my eyes, But ever
    one else is fooled by my disguise

    Would perhaps be better as

    Seem to dry my eyes, But everyone
    else is fooled by my disguise

    Some spelling mistakes - 'stair' should be stare and there are some /'s which could easily be taken out :)

    Other than that - the poem was beautiful :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h huni beautifully w0rded. a t0uching piece. great j0b 0n this 0ne!! =]

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    That's great Ash!! :D