That's great Ash!! :D

0h huni beautifully w0rded. a t0uching piece. great j0b 0n this 0ne!! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Beautiful poetry - though there are a few small mistakes.

Seem to dry my eyes, But ever
one else is fooled by my disguise

Would perhaps be better as

Seem to dry my eyes, But everyone
else is fooled by my disguise

Some spelling mistakes - 'stair' should be stare and there are some /'s which could easily be taken out :)

Other than that - the poem was beautiful :)

Peace. [Sole]

Hmm, this is an ok love poem, it had quite a few problems in it...but it was lovely to read.
First stanza on the second line it should be "you're" and then on the third line, "we've."
Fourth stanza first line it should be "you're" and the same for the fourth line of the seventh stanza.
Final stanza, first line it should be "your."
You had some really romantic and sweet ideas, but to me the rhymes seemed a bit cheesy and overused.
A loving poem, but it could do with some touching up.

Very touching well done there are some very sweet ideas in their