Wow. I'm impressed! I didn't expect it to be so good. It's well written. Loved it. Nice use of words/ and rhyming. It flows pretty well.

I just think I few phrases might be a little bit too long, like the 4th one.

But oh well, that's ok =) It's a nice piece of work anyway! =)

Well done!

Lotsaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

I have had a tough past few days so your comment really made me smile. Thank you. You write wonderfully. Your flow could probably be a little better (I'm still working on mine) but other than that you're a pretty amazing writer. Never stop.

hugs and best wishes,
Mary