Wow :'(
Great poem hun that's heartbreaking.
Please dont let it be the cause although i knwo this is just a poem, it seems straight from the heart and i dont want you thinking of using suicide as your wy out. DOnt let them win ok?
Ill be back to read more of ur poems:P
much love
xoox

Simply gr8.......nice words used....great emotions .....

waiting 4 the 3rd part......

luv,
Bharti

This part is similar to one of my poems, "Already Gone." I LOVE this series. KEEP GOING! 5/5

Ayo yourr writtings are so deep love them mami keep it up oh and thanks for the comment

This one is deep too for sure
5/5

all the best and take care

Monique, we talk, and your such a great person. I hope that You dont attempt sucide, I've learned that its not the way out. Your so cool, and you understand me. Your the best. Plz see that i'm not the only one who knows that. I dont know what to say, other than I love you and your writing. Talk to u later. keep it up. YOUR FABULOUS!

Great poem i lyke dis kant wait til part 3 cumz. keep dem cumin'.