by Fallen~Tears Mar 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
She spends hours and hours getting ready for the boy who will never look her way |
by Jessica
Wow.. amazing! this was very very good! and i can soo relate, itz lik you wrote about my feelings instead of yours! lol.. keep it up! 5/5 |
by Bridgette
Aw this is so sad. I can definitely relate to it with me trying so hard to get my ex to notice me & stuff. This is really good! and im sure many people can relate to it! Great job! 5/5** |
by Ashlick
Very very good, keep it up |
by Tripp
Words I read will rarely stir up such a reaction as this poem did...I actually almost felt tears, which is DEEP coming from me...But yes, one of my personal favorites, keep up the great work :) |
by Sole
Sad - I can almost relate if you changed a few words . . . Beautiful poetry. Glad to see you still writing amazing stuff like this :) |