Wow, I can't believe I was the first to comment and vote for this poem. Great work. 5/5

This is me. totally captured the feelings. awesome job

This was perfet.... but the flow was a little off in the frst stanza...

Sad - I can almost relate if you changed a few words . . . Beautiful poetry. Glad to see you still writing amazing stuff like this :)

Peace. [Sole]

Words I read will rarely stir up such a reaction as this poem did...I actually almost felt tears, which is DEEP coming from me...But yes, one of my personal favorites, keep up the great work :)

Very very good, keep it up

Ashlick(ashley)

Aw this is so sad. I can definitely relate to it with me trying so hard to get my ex to notice me & stuff. This is really good! and im sure many people can relate to it! Great job! 5/5**

Wow.. amazing! this was very very good! and i can soo relate, itz lik you wrote about my feelings instead of yours! lol.. keep it up! 5/5