Wow!!!!! loved it, keep it up, it was very good!!!!!!

I seem to like this one a little. Probably because I can relate a little bit. I Know what you are talking about through this. My suggestion is to make the lengths in each stanza the same. I have that same problem.

When you post something like

So you say goodbye...
I begin to think it was all just a lie
I start to cry
It was just a lie, when you said I love you.

Since the lines are all different amounts of syllables and words its a little more difficult to make it flow. Besides that it was amazing and i'll check more out soon.

I enjoyed this poem and it exsplanes exsactly what i am going through now