Our Neighborhood: Broken Up over Him

by Raychel   Mar 19, 2006


Hell has taken over,
No more love to share,
Unless it\'s for you two,
but i dont think u care

u think about ur \'love\'
what u have together,
But u\'all fail to notice,
That we all have to suffer.

i cant take it anymore
i might break,
its not them,
but u both that i cant take

so think about us,
Me,
But if u fail to notice our pain,
Then u cant see

dont slip and fall,
dont drown in the water below when u slip,
so think about our pain,
when ur all over each other\'s lips

i will go with them,
but u\'all will prevail,
u will be awesome and hot together,
and we\'ll be lonley and pale.

remember me when im gone,
but im not gone...not just yet,
dont let me fall into darkness while ur basking in the sun,
not until my pain have u met.

save me
dont leave me
screw him
please see.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I kno i kno, it wont be the same, but she doesnt care b/c she is happy. if i cry she will laugh and if i move on she wont care. why does her happines always come at such a price? i am always left in the dust and she could care less as long as i stay out of her way. if thats the way she feels then ok. i guess i will stay out of her life and never be there to wipe the tears, buy the stuff, make her laugh, or agree w/ heer ridiculous ideas. im too much of a burden for her to hav to deal w/. i am there for u tho. grrt poem. lylas,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney

    Ray let them be how can it hurt u if your best friend and i mean BEST FRIEND is happy? i dont get it please tell me.its a good poem but gosh she is happy so u should be 2 shouldnt u i mean its not like he likes u or u lke him u got bf so how would u feel if this happend 2 u with dustin? and 2 ppl were mad @ u 4 go n out with him and u were happy would u break ^ with him please tell me i dont get it? call me lylas 4 allways no lie ~coco

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