Last Breath.

This is such a moving poem. 5/5 every word seems perfectly chosen and placed. congrats
xxx

The poem was interesting, it wasn't very descriptive and the flow was broken off but it was good to read. I liked how you ended with a question instead of a statement, most people don't generally do that in their poetry anymore. Good job.

Woah that one was depressing

Dang wasnt expecting that....nice tho