Comments : Last Breath.

  • 18 years ago

    by glass*wall*prison

    Dang wasnt expecting that....nice tho

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy D1am0nd

    Woah that one was depressing

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    The poem was interesting, it wasn't very descriptive and the flow was broken off but it was good to read. I liked how you ended with a question instead of a statement, most people don't generally do that in their poetry anymore. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    This is such a moving poem. 5/5 every word seems perfectly chosen and placed. congrats
    xxx