Very well writin, great job, keep it up hun and take care sarah x

LOVE IT,LOVE IT,LOVE IT,LOVE IT, AND ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!

Amazing poem - Really well written, and puts across a really valid point. Very nice poetry indeed.

Peace. [Sole]

I love this poem. And I think it's a great one to write about because its something every girl has to fight with atleast once. Just one question is realize suppose to be twice???
then one day ill realise I'll realize I got it all wrong
I kinda like it twice but if you want to show its suppose to be there and not a typo put it on the next line like this...
then one day ill realise
I'll realize I got it all wrong

This poem is great! im so glad its a rue story because it shows jsut how strong you are! great job! keep the poems coming!
XoOx molly

LOVED the rhyming.

So sad, I'm sorry.

joy*:.xx

"and when each day did dawn - grass soaked with dew"

A lovely line.

I can relate to this so well. I had a friend like this, and I'd endure her insults, or backhanded comments, and laugh along - but one day I got seriously fed up and snapped at her - which made me feel happier than ever.

Thank you for reminding me of that. It's one of my favourite memories. A great poem aside, and nothing appears to be wrong with it. Good work. x

Excellent poem, very exiting!

Wow that was so full of emotion. It didn't seem like it would end the way you ended it. I loved it though. Absolutely amazing.

Wow gr8 poem keep it up 5/5

Wow.
I can soooooo relate..

Ugh!
...

Great poem! 5/5

Amazing poem. I too write about things when I have problems, but sometimes it helps to hear a poem from someone else, who is going through the same thing. I hope you had the strength to get away from that "friendship." I am in the middle of the situation you wrote about but I don't have the strength to get away. I loved your poem. Im not alone.