Comments : Forever y0ung ;x

  • 18 years ago

    by beyond help

    Awwwwwwww , that is probably the saddest poem ive ever read
    thats a fantastic poem though
    5/5 ... kepp it up

    bEyOnDhElP

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    I cannot describe how sad your extreme loss makes me feel. Stay positive in the face of this tragedy and keep writing it helps

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    I'm sorry for your loss. Hope it helps you a little bit to write about it. You've did a great job. It's a fantastic poem. I'm sure they are somewhere out there, and proud of you.

    Keep that chin up. Keep writing.

    Lotsaaaaaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Soz 4 your loss great poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by LOUISE

    That poem is tryley amazing and should be so proud of yourself.. keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Imogen

    That is one of te saddest things I have ever read. I almost cried.

    Thanks for your comment on my poem.

    Love Imi x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Heyy darling. ur the 2nd pers0n ive c0me acr0ss 0n this site wh0 knew c0ry.. that was really sad.. i was thinking 0f c0ry just b4 i came 0nline. i live in mill park.. he used t0 ive near me.. ur p0em was really sad and hit h0me. ive g0t tearz in my eyez. neway a t0uching piece and im sure him and the 0ther 5 are all l0oking d0wn 0n u and all the rest 0f us. heartfelt p0em darl. =] if u ever need t0 talk t0 s0me1 u can just email me - i really d0nt mind..

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Ohmy. This poem is so sad. I heard about this sad event, all over the news. And it was such a horrible event. I live only two hours away. I'm sorry for your loss,I really am. This poem brought me to tears. Its so emotional. Be strong doll. And once again my condolences for you. Such an excellent write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This poem I believe everyone can relate to. Everyone knows someone that died young or commited suicide. I think this let's a lot of thoughts go out on paper, like your mind is writen on paper.

    It is very well done and i really appreciate. I know that they are in heaven and are watching over you.

    If you ever need someone to talk to you can send me an e-mail.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Lost*Love*

    This would have 2 be the MOST MEANINGFUL poem i have EVA read... i know that i have neva met those ppl but that poem made me cry coz 2 think of the pain ur going through... well just keep living life the best u can,

    all the best love, Mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow that is so sad and I to am glad he got what he deserved but they can never be replaced and I have lost loved once also and it hurts like hell and I love the words u used to described where they are now great poem and thank u for the comments on mine 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    I heard about that story and I couldn't believe the driver vertually got away with it...
    I'm sorry for your lose....Well written poem and well expressed . very sad...
    xo