I'll give up everything for you

Paradise is where I am
Eternal Life is why I'm alive
Silver stunning wings is what I have
And I thought this is enough to make me happy
On earth, I heard this gloomy voice...
Crying, Looking for someone to love
And as I layed my eyes upon his
I can't help not to take glympse again
Your sadden heart touches my empty heart
Trying to fill it with an unusual feeling
Oh dear God let me be with him...
Coz I know what I'll be missing
My lost heart finally found what I've been looking for
So, I'd give up everything to have him
This wings, and my immortality
I really need and love him...
More than the air that he breathe
Coz my life in heaven is nil without him!!!

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