Omg awsum poem, i loved it, the rhyme shceme was perfect and the flow was flawless :) i really enjoyed reading it :) keep writing :)

~StefQ

Wow.. this poem is really good.. im in a similar position, n it is hard to forget some1 you love.. :) keep writing! 5/5
jessy

Awe. :( I'm sorry about your loss. I've been there. Maybe not in exactly the same place but in a similar place. You will heal and move on it just takes a while and some learning. Wonderful job on the poem! Hang in there!

Intense, powerful and emotional. Truly written from the bottom of your heart. Great write. 5/5

Wow Bridgette! This poem was truely amasing, every line was flawless, i especially liked these lines :

"Harsh words spoken about another
So why stop now, we hate each other"

Absolutely amasing, great work.

--Steph

AMAZING WORK ..... Your are incredibly talented!!! 5/5

OMG! I love this poem.. im completely can relate .. it is amazing!! hehe!!