by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX Mar 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Losing you was all that I thought off |
by MissGem
OMG... that is exactly how my ex makes me feel!! your poems aer beautiful n thanx for your comments looks like we goin through sorta the same shit so if ya wanna talk latino_babe4life@hotmail.com take it easy xoxoxo |
This is good and sweet... but you need to have more of a rhyming pattern... try it on your next one.... try a abcb combination where the 2nd and last line of the stanza rhyme.... or a abab combination.... luck!!!! |
by PURE HEART
That was really nice......u write so well.....keep writing dear! |
by sandy
Hey hunny this poem is awesome. I can relate to this... keep writing you have a lot of talent:P |