Hey hunny this poem is awesome. I can relate to this... keep writing you have a lot of talent:P
check out my poems if you'd like=)
-sandy-

That was really nice......u write so well.....keep writing dear!

all the best

luv,
Bharti

This is good and sweet... but you need to have more of a rhyming pattern... try it on your next one.... try a abcb combination where the 2nd and last line of the stanza rhyme.... or a abab combination.... luck!!!!

::MELI::

OMG... that is exactly how my ex makes me feel!! your poems aer beautiful n thanx for your comments looks like we goin through sorta the same shit so if ya wanna talk latino_babe4life@hotmail.com take it easy xoxoxo