I love this poem=) you are very talented keep up the good work hun
check out my poems if you'd like=)
-sandy-

Haha im loving your inspiration Andy!
Please however, although possibly not aimed at me, i am anything but an 'emo'. My poems just express..my 'inner demons'..lol.
Your analysis of my poem made me smile, great effort and thankyou.
About this poem!
..Isn't pain what life's all about?
omg that line..wow. It's so simple, highlights the true meanign of life i guess.
Thankyou for the enlightenment.
I will continue to comment later..o and welcome to the Fishbowl:P
>torn -x.x.x-

Andy i love this poem it's gr8
it's really cute..awwww
smooches
keirstin

Hey
hmm.. good job, once again:)
Monique

WOW...that was excellent..and you say this is your first time writing??? This poem was one of the best love poems ive read..and im not big on love poems...great job..the last stanza was my favorite...Keep up the good work..Joc

Sorry but forget the first time writting bit...put it under the wrong person sorry bout that....Joc

Like the style