Love the ending - the whole World seems dark sometimes doesn't it?

Brilliantly heartfelt
This was great

Sondos

I liked the otheres better. still a good poem. the change in ryhming was a bit odd, but the poem had a great idea behind it.

Ruby

Wow your like freaking amazing like i am for realy your poems are great so deep with feeling and great with expression keep it up 5.5

Sole, this was beautiful emotion penned, Lovers drift apart and feel so close yet so far apart. Trying to capture those feelings in this hypothetical poem.
"The worst kind of missing
is missing someone who is
sitting right next to you
Until you felt so far apart."

gloria's glen.

Your my sheroe....
xxx

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Yeah, i loved it, it was great
xxxxxxx

Good choice of words here! well done! well penned! keep writing!

A very emotional and sad poem...i can relate a lot to it... the flow is awesome, at the end almost takes the readers breath away...
keep on writing...

*isabel*