Loved it 5/5

love Dean xoxoxox

NO 3.8 is NOT bad....its over fair so its not bad at all =/

I really like this poem,well writen, good choice of words. its a 5 from me. much luv lynne

My friend was like that too, she was a bit of a dik, but good poem i enjoyed it

This was good, but you had quite a few mistakes in it (e.g. spelling errors, not capitalizing when you should have, etc). It's those things which make people down-vote poems (sometimes).

Anyhow, I thought it was good. If you fix the mistakes then it could be brilliant. =] 4/5.

Aww this is sad too!!! wow i like reading you poems they touch my heart!!! keep it up

Oh HOLY CRAP

I LOVE this.

The anger and rage screams out from each and every word in this, while the imagery was very vivid.

The only thing that I didn't like was in quite a few lines you stopped the sentence halfway through and moved onto the next line and I thought that disrupted the flow sometimes.

For the most part though, the flow was undisturbed.

How I love that ending stanza.
I may hate cliche self harm poems, but I have actually been through the self harm problem, so I know how irritating it is when someone does it for attention and just doesn't understand it.

I found this to be beautifully written and filled with such intenisty..and that ending..wow. I can't get over that.

I love this.

The reason that it had a low rating was because of the spelling including the own title my dear. Some people don't like misspelling in the poem or in the title it gives a bad first impression that being said I love how it flowed and you had a lot of spelling errors regarding how to spelling words and capitalizing the word "I" everything else was nice it flowed all the way down to the end but you're not supposed to have capitalized letters besides "I" in the poem my dear sorry to be the barrier of bad news either way I enjoyed it. The story that was the poem was dark not sad either way I loved the poem. 5/5

-Mori