Clap

Ok so honestly.. i dont really understnad the meaning of this poem.. lol.. but its sounds really great! hehe :D

Dang! amazed again... another G-R-E-A-T poem my my favorite poet EVER.... *SILVER J*

**meggie**

Oooh...I really love your style is unique, witty, entertaining with out losing any power behind the words...interesting stuff...*reads more*

I like the traffic-light metaphor. It's generally quite good, but it's kind of too modern for my tastes. It's more prose than poetry, I'd say. But it's nice anyway.

Silver, what a poem! creative poem with your unique style written.. simply but nicely done. "a stranger it mean unique." and thanks for the comment you left and give me an inspiration how to write, although i'm not good in skill nor perfet poet, anyway, you're just greater than great poet. have a
nice day!

gloria's glen.