Not really my style but i like it, i like how you compared it all with umm what is the word.. childhood lullybies or childhood storys.. can't think of the work. anyways NICE JOB :-) keep writting

Hey Silver,
After this poem I'm starting to take a liking to yours. I love how I can get such pictures from your words. Good luck with writing.

Its very interesting, and kept reading till the end, still i didn't really understand it's concept... to be honest i prefer the other poems i've read - i'm just not intellegent enough to understand this! *blush*
take care
rob

I love this poem!..it had nice flow and i loved the meaning of it...very well written!
~*linz*~

Silver, what a poem! creative poem with your unique style written.. simply but nicely done. "a stranger it mean unique." and thanks for the comment you left and give me an inspiration how to write, although i'm not good in skill nor perfet poet, anyway, you're just greater than great poet. have a
nice day!

gloria's glen.

I like the traffic-light metaphor. It's generally quite good, but it's kind of too modern for my tastes. It's more prose than poetry, I'd say. But it's nice anyway.

Oooh...I really love your style is unique, witty, entertaining with out losing any power behind the words...interesting stuff...*reads more*

Dang! amazed again... another G-R-E-A-T poem my my favorite poet EVER.... *SILVER J*

**meggie**

Ok so honestly.. i dont really understnad the meaning of this poem.. lol.. but its sounds really great! hehe :D