I love it. I really do.

You might want to correct those spelling mistakes :) they kind of take a bita way from the beautiful words you chose.

All i noticed was a couple of spelling mistakes
Apart from that, plenty of beauty =]

Wow I loved this one.. love poems dont usually capture my attention unless they have a sad theme to them..but this one was so sweet and innocent and the way it was written reminded me of how beautiful love can really be when its true.. thanx for makine me belive in true love again after all of these years.. nice job.. 5/5

Wow, this poem was amazing. So sweet and very beautifully
Written. You expressed everything very well. I especially liked
The two first lines. and…mm..I think there was a spelling mistake
In the last line of the second stanza. “tear” not “tare”.
You seem really talented. Keep it up.
Much love,
Marjan

Great j0b 0n this 0ne t0o darl. beautifully w0rded. heartfelt keep it up =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Aww - such a sweet poem :) There was just one line

And the times I prayed that nothing would tare us apart

I think 'tare' should be 'tear' - But apart from that, the flow, rhyming and rhythm is excellent :)

Peace. [Sole]

I love it.
it flowed beautifully.
the thoughts in it and the message were beautiful.
and it was just really great.
well done.
Love,
ALLY xx

Hey, this one is really beautiful, very nicely penned, great flow.

take care and all the best
5/5

Very good. You are a good writer and i am adding you to my favorites so i will probably comment on a lot of yours. Thanx for the comment on mine.
xxKaylaXX

Very strong poem. Great consistant flow and rhymes. Keep it up

Wow your poem blew me away. I love your writing style, you bring your words to life. Wonderful job, I loved it!!

Wow such an honest display of emotions,,really like your poem,,
thanks for the comment on my poem it means alot,,,,
all the best

Amira
always smile :)

This is a sweet and heartfelt poem. You kept me reading right to the end, although in places due to the long lines the flow was lost a little.
First stanza third line i think you meant "begins" rather than "beings."
I thought it was written well and the rhyme wasn't forced however in places I feel it became a tad predictable.
Good job, keep writing.

This poem was Amazing
Excellent Flow
Excellent Rhyme
Excellent Message in your love
Wonderful Job
keep up the great work
5/5
~TBOY~

Hey dear I love the poem :) Add me you lamoose

The memories you say in you rpoems are similar to my memories i share with my boyfriend of a year!! You did a fantastic Job!! Truely loved it!! 6/5!!!

OMG this is so nice! I love this poem so much! I can relate like yeah I just can't explain it how it relates! But it does! I love everything bout it! Well you had some spelling mistakes but even though you did I still understood it and loved it! Love is and feels so good when it's true! I love how everything was written! I just added you in my favorites! Love it! 5/5! Take care!
~*~Cindy~*~

I like this poem. I thought it was cute and adorable, The flow and wording was once again perfectly. Great Write.

Another great poem.. you have some excellent writing.. i am reading em all lol 5/5