Wow, you show great potential in the poems I've read, :
And further now from my own truth,
Falling faster now as strength reduced.
Very interesting lines =), Keep it up and coming
Other news: Welcome to the Bowl! lol *Is here to welcome you to the club* I'm jenn, aka the manager, if you have any problems dont be afarid to ask me or fighter or >tornapart, well be happy to help! I have a few things I ask of everyone when they join, a) you read the welcome message, and b) fallow the rules.