by Jon Hunt Mar 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
new love
How could I be expecting this, |
by Emma
I thought it was beautifully writen...nice job.... |
by Biscuit
Wow this flows so well, and it paints a great picture, excellent use of words xx |
Beautiful, I love the was you structure your poetry, the pace, the rhyme, it flows seamlessly.....i love it....!! |
by sandy
Awe i love this poem keep it up |