Comments : Expectation

  • 18 years ago

    by sandy

    Awe i love this poem keep it up
    -sandy-

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Beautiful, I love the was you structure your poetry, the pace, the rhyme, it flows seamlessly.....i love it....!!

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Wow this flows so well, and it paints a great picture, excellent use of words xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I thought it was beautifully writen...nice job....
    Emma 5/5