Awe. i love this, it is so true. you are a wondeful writer nd just keep getting better!

Awe. i love this, it is so true. you are a wondeful writer nd just keep getting better!

Wow i agree you hav improved so much. This poem is amazing..really original and just completely different. It dares to wonder beneath the surface but unlike the typical mask way. I am very proud of you:P
Id LOVE for you to join a club im assisting in..the Fish Bowl! it's an awesome club and we want friends and readers, and you're both:P so please do!
Love u lots hun xoxo
PS: ill try sending another email then:P and dont worry, mine do that too...go to the junk mail folder that is.

*hugs*

Once again, wonderful. everytime i see you have a new one i get all giddy. i love your poems. they are great. keep it up.

Hey, nice work again! I'd haev to say my fave bit would be the 3rd verse. Incredible, really. Keep writing!
-Suzie
xox

Wow ur poem is really nice...im glad u liked mine even though its not nearly my favorite lol thanks for the comment! ~valerie

This is simply amazing!!!

Intersting Poem. I'm a fan of this poem of yours, so unquie! Great work. Keep writing.
*Juls*

Very well said...made me think...
To answer your question well i don't think so...people put so much pressure on girls to be a certain way it's terrible...
keep writting hunn I love it when I check and you have new stuff up!
luv ya-xxx-

Very well said...made me think...
To answer your question well i don't think so...people put so much pressure on girls to be a certain way it's terrible...
keep writting hunn I love it when I check and you have new stuff up!
luv ya-xxx-

This poem is so good I absolutley love it 5/5! =D

Very, very nice, i've never read a poem like this, not like I literaly could cause you wrote it, but just the meaning behind i love the flow, and it just brought a smile to my face when i was done because it was a really good poem.

The good though not excellent. The words were good but the flow had a slight flaw but love the content.
~Faith

I have to agree with everyone that this is a great poem! I was wondering what your insperation for it was? What brought this to your mind?

Wow! thats all I can say for that poem. I really liked it. It had so much emotion in it. I wish I could write like you.

Hey - it has a awesome underlying theme./..lovied it..mwa

Awesome. Nice visualization.

Wow, your flow here is excellent, I liked the little break away from the rest of it you have with 'She's falling under, and now I wonder...' because it's different. Nice work :)