It brilliant penned by you md, simply write yet absolutely beautiful, so meaningful yet truth..well ended..

This poem deserves more comments than it is receiving. It is absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed it. Keep it up, you are a tremendous writer.

.. and your telling me i had a powerful message.. you sir are an incredible poet and you poem sends a very very powerful message.. keep in touch. in the meantime im going to add you to my favorites.

~David

Wow, a truly amazing poem. Wonderful flow and great rhymes. The message is strong and clear. Keep it up

The repetition really helps th epoem to flow and gives it a great pace, i think u need to put some commas in several places.

xx

I love this so much. its awesome. the truth and meaning in it is so clear. a really beautiful write. thankyou xXx

Beautiful poem!! its truly amazing and such truth!!