Nice job keep up the good work 5.5

Nice one!...i loved it...very nice job....well expressed!...5/5!

Even though I haven’t watched that serial haley, I can
Perfectly watch it in my mind as I read your poem. How
Could you write it all down in a short poem like this!!!
I really really enjoyed it. But, I didn’t understand the
Part you said “keep us quiet”. Why did you say that?
Much love,
Marjan

This i9s really good short but youve expressed so much. You are really good xx ALLY xx

*shudders at knowing what the poems about/for* Really great choice of words and I like the style. I can tell it might have been a lot of work or hard thought.