Hey good poem, I liked it!! 5/5

Nice job
-lonelynow

Wow this was a really nice poem love the way you wrote it! i especially liked the ending! Keep it up! ^_^

Thats a sweet poem good job

Amazing!! i really liked this! your love poems are shorter and easier to read but your sad poems i think are slightly better..

i may have to reconsider this opinion after this poem though!

very very good!

keep writing

lonelynow xxxxxx

Grrt poem and the topic isnt easy to write something grrt....kinda basic, u couldve gone in deeper but it was good...thx for ur comment,
love ya lots,
sore

I love that, its amazing, where do u come up with all these?

I really like this poem..very good emotions...your poem flows really great...i could relate! ha
-alicia

U already kno u r going to get good comments.. This is hella great. You're very thoughtful!

This poem is amazing.
Very sweet, great love poem.

What a sweet poem!
The love you discribe must be an awesome feeling.. Hope she feels the same..
Good flow and words.
Beautiful penned.
Take care

Very, very good, one of the best one I read from you I'd say. It was innocent, sweet and well written, you had good rhymes here.

Brad