Comments : Who could we (revise of fall to the sand)

  • 18 years ago

    by Shellie

    This is a realy sweet poem... i know how it felles when you lose someone close to you...it hurts, real bad. well keep writing and well done. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by emptily whole

    Thank u sooo much for ur comment..i havent written in a while so im not so good but this poem is something spectaculor.reminds me of a friend of mine...keep writing,i'll DEFFINATELY keep checking!keep ur head up and smile!xxxxx